AJ and April
"That last blog wasn't very good," she said.
"I know, it could have been more ... better," AJ replied. "I was a character in it and even I was bored."
"This is hard. I hate having bad writing spells."
"I know, but you're the one who wanted to do it like this. Just keep trying to picture yourself in a frame, and then describe what goes on in that frame. Use more dialogue, so the reader doesn't have to live in that cramped little mind of yours, forced to eavesdrop on your boring thoughts," AJ suggested.
"Right." A long, protracted sigh seeped from her lips. "Three and a half more days to write, and two of them were at Disneyland, so that will be easy."
"Try not to downplay Disney. I know you would have rather gone hiking those days, but your family enjoyed it, and it wasn't a horrible time," AJ said.
"I like when my family enjoys themselves ..."
"I know, it could have been more ... better," AJ replied. "I was a character in it and even I was bored."
"This is hard. I hate having bad writing spells."
"I know, but you're the one who wanted to do it like this. Just keep trying to picture yourself in a frame, and then describe what goes on in that frame. Use more dialogue, so the reader doesn't have to live in that cramped little mind of yours, forced to eavesdrop on your boring thoughts," AJ suggested.
"Right." A long, protracted sigh seeped from her lips. "Three and a half more days to write, and two of them were at Disneyland, so that will be easy."
"Try not to downplay Disney. I know you would have rather gone hiking those days, but your family enjoyed it, and it wasn't a horrible time," AJ said.
"I like when my family enjoys themselves ..."
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